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 Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 7:35 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 8:51 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 8:49 pm
Thank you, Aegis. How was it? Grammar Problems? Punctuation, Capilization, anything wrong with it?
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 3:09 am
there were a few spelling errors, but eh, whatever. If I remember your age correctly, something like that is really minor, but the substance, the flavor is there.
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:20 am
wow a bit depressing.... mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 3:25 pm
Thanks Aegis, I asked one of my friends to put it through Spell Check, so it should be good, now. Thanks Arjofa, but it's supposed to tell you how my father spent his life, and how he has the experiance to give. Take it, and apply it to your life. Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it.
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