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 Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 10:45 am
I'm trying to make another story for my past time. i've come up with an idea, but I dont have any one in me neighborhood right now to opinionate it.
Leslie sat there,awaiting Mark, her boyfriend, to come and pick her up for their movie. His car pulled up in her drive way, only to find that the person i the driver's seat wasn't Mark, but it was his brother, Kyle, who had just escaped from jail. In the back seat, Mark lay there, not moving at all.
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 9:39 am
that sounds promising
but it will all depend on how you write it
i'll look forward to reading it if you post it in the Original Fiction section 3nodding
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