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that's really good!

well here's my short story of a poem lol




The pain you made me feel

While others say yay I say Squee. When you say live a little I say go die. When you say life I say death. When you say love I say I‘ve never felt. When you cry I laugh. When my heart brakes, I cry you all just stare scared. When you cry I laugh. Pain is what I feel, friends are your forte. I turn up the music just to get away; you come in and take it away. You feel dead to me. You reach out your hand to me I pause then take it then you let go and I fall. I put on a fake smile, and walk away like nothing happened but inside I’m screaming blaming myself. You laugh at my stupidity. How am I stupid for trusting you? Just the fact that I tried. You reach out again saying it’ll be different this time and I turn away. I don’t feel like dieing again. 1 away from 3 your face comes back to haunt my dreams. As I turn the corner I see you smiling at me I glare back. Death 2 times is too much for me. When I see you the pain comes back. I close my eyes and look away; do you just enjoy torturing me? You pull at you my heart but you could never heal what you did. Why oh why did I ever love you? I guess it was just my imagination acting on my feelings, but when you let me go I died. You call me up the very next day, I answer the phone. You ask to see me. My heart jumps for joy. When I get there you never show. My heart brakes smaller and that makes 3. 3 deaths in 1 lifetime no one should endure that. When you look at me I walk the other way. Last night I couldn’t take it any more to bad for you I left before you could say “I’m sorry” now I’m gone and you grieve on it. Now I know that I was loved but now I’m dead and that makes 4. 4 times I’ve died 1 literal 3 not, no turning back now. The next day you came again back to me. Again we’re together but now we’re both dead. You next to me and the world has lost 2, but we are happy and smiling, me for the first time in a long time as our souls pass on together. So the moral you see don’t die before you know you’re loved by none or by all.

lol it's a long poem but a short story. but do you really think it's good?

You can not be serious. stare

you have to give some points for puting in the effort to write that terribly long poem

Ok, thank you! I always love sujestions (I'm still hopeless when it comes to spelling sweatdrop )

If I have enouph time, I paste what I wrote in Microsoft Word, but I rarely have enouph time to do that for every post.