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Requiem of Madness. Rated M for violence, blood and cursing.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 6:47 am


Note: Yeah, it's short. Oh well. In this one there isnt any blood/violence/cursing. But there will be. As much as I think. Hope you enjoy it ! biggrin

Requiem of Madness.
Chapter 1.
How it all begun.


‘’Hi...’’

Every one backed away as the girl made her way down the corridor.

‘’My name is Neiko...’’


Some people whispered to each other, some yelled at her. She only smiled. The smile that made everyone mad.

‘’And this is my story...’’


Her right eye watched everyone like a hawk. Her blood red eye craving for blood. Everyone looked at her in disgust. She turned to her right, almost stepping in Biology’s classroom as a person popped up out of nowhere, smiling her goofy smile.
‘’Hey, Nei !’’ the girl said smiling at the red eyed girl. Neiko frowned and tried to side-step her sister, but it didnt work, since she didnt let her.
‘’What do you want Sylverant ?’’ Neiko asked irrated by her little sister.

‘’My cute, little sister Sylverant...’’

‘’Hey, did you forget that this is my class too ?’’ Sylverant huffed and put her hands on her hips. This little ball of energy is my sister, Sylverant. Almost every student in this school likes her, even though, she sometimes fails in tests, is clumsy and daydreams in her classes and free time. She’s pretty much popular. Unlike me. I am not popular. I’m a freak as everyone says that. I dont have my left eye, that’s why I wear a black eye-patch. And my right eye is blood-red. Blond, short hair. And I wear black and white clothes everyday. Except in school. I have to wear a damn uniform that has blue mini-skirt, a white blouse and blue vest over it all, blue and white socks and brown shoes. How nice.

‘’What a beautiful puppet she would be...’’


‘’No I didn’t...’’ Neiko rolled her eyes as she side-stepped her sister again, this time successfully. She sat in her seat, in the back of the classroom as Sylverant sat next to her. Neiko merely glanced at her smiling sister.
‘’Well, why dont you sit with me in lunch ? Will you, Big sis ?’’ Sylverant asked almost bouncing in her seat from excitement.

‘’....Maybe, I can change that...’’


‘’Do we have to go over this every morning, Sylverant ?’’ Neiko asked, and glared down at her books. Everyone got the vibe and turned to look at the arguing sisters.
Sylverant rolled her eyes. ‘’Just answer. Yes or No ?’’
‘’No.’’ Neiko said as Sylverant huffed. ‘’You should know, this by now, that I won’t sit with your so called ‘friends’. They all call me freak and I dont want to even hear your friends annoying, high pitched voices...’’ she said it calmly, as her glare softened and she turned her head in her little sister’s direction.
Sylverant frowned, but nodded anyway. She knew that her big sis hated her friends. They always had called her ‘a freak’. Neiko smiled a small smile. It wasnt a smirk or a wicked grin, it was a simple, sad smile, on her pale pink lips. A loud cough was heard as everyone turned their heads to the front, where the teacher stood, glaring at everyone. The teacher sighed and said. ‘’Good morning, students...’’ everone said their ‘good mornings’ as the 3rd period started for everyone.

~*~ FastForward to lunch ~*~

Neiko bit into her apple and looked at her sketch. She didnt hear anyone as she listened to her iPod on full volume. Some students glanced at her.

‘’ I'm a punk, I'm a sinner
I'm lost new beginner
I'm a threat to myself
I'm a get armargeddon
I'm a freak, I'm a liar
I'm a flirt, I deny that I know it, Then I mess it up...
And sometimes I feel like
I'm only one
No wonder why I've become
So dum so dum di dum di dum...’’


Some people rolled their eyes as they already knew the song that Neiko listened everyday. A person sat next to her, but Neiko didnt notice. Neiko had always sat alone. Nobody didnt even wanted to sit next to the freak, fearing that they might start to act like her. The person next to her huffed annoyed - not that Neiko heard – and poked her side, making Neiko jump from surprise. She looked at Sylverant who was laughing. Neiko shut off her iPod and put it in her backpack. Sylverant had stopped laughing and watched her sister sat down and glare at her. Sylverant just smiled as Neiko sighed annoyed. ‘’Hey, Nei !’’
Neiko only nodded and looked again at her sketches. Sylverant looked at her sistrs sketches and smiled. ‘’Are you making new dolls, sister ?’’
Neiko smiled and nodded. It was her hobby to make...dolls as her sister would say. Neiko called them puppets. She had made over 20 puppets that stood in her room. But this time, she would work on a human-sized puppet.
‘’Can’t wait to see it !’’ Sylverant said and ate her apple. Neiko nodded and looked at her sketch, smiling. But it was a wicked smile...
PostPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:26 am


that's really good, it seems really intaresting though I am a little confused ... what's it based on?

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:29 am


It's actually my original story. The story goes somewhere in America. The basic of the story goes around Neiko, who will make everyone a.... oh, that would be a spoiler... hehe sorry ! ^^;;

Oh my ! It's good to see that someone likes it ! heart heart heart
PostPosted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 2:56 pm


Sounds interesting, Voodoo perhaps?, maybe some lack magic?, or Vampire magic maybe?, remember to add a male freak, one of those who would fit in Silent Hill

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 10:21 am


Ah thank you~ ! heart

Hehe, a bit of a magic, a bit of a blood.

There will be actually two male freaks in it. ^^ I think... ._.

Edit:
Okay a lot of blood. ._.

About those freaks... well. They might be freaks but might not... ^^;
PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:44 pm


that's interesting, hope you update soon

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:58 am


Note: Please enjoy ! biggrin

Requiem of Madness.
Chapter 2.
Alive.


~After school~

Neiko walked out of the school with others. Though everyone tryed to keep a distance from her. This only made Neiko sigh, but smirk too. ~Cowards...~ she though. Sylverant was with her friends. So that ment she had time for herself ! The thought of free time made her smile in head. She quickly walked out of the schools courtyard and out of the gates. People gave her threating looks. However, it only made her chuckle. ~Oh how I enjoy this...~ she thought. Everybody hated her or feared her. Well that wasnt what she wanted. Neiko actually wanted to be normal. But it seemed that nobody wanted to listen or understand her.
Neiko had walked for about 10 minutes. She walked in a shop. A book shop. She gave a wave at the shopkeeper and picked up an old book. It was dusty too. But look at the price. Only 50 dollars. She had always looked at the book. It looked really interesting. It was. There was a spell that she had wanted to try for ages. She quickly went to the counter where the shopkeeper was and put doen 50 dollars. ‘’Thank you !’’ the sjopkeeper said and smiled. Neiko nodded and went out of the shop in the rain.
Sfter a long walk from the shop to her house. Neiko finally opened the door to her house, compleatly soaked. ‘’Ugh...’’ she frowned. She took off her shoes and walked into the kitchen.
Silence.
Nothing.
Neiko raised her right eyebrow. Her parents would usually sit and drink tea or coffee. But nothing. There wasnt any living soul.
‘’Meow.’’ A quiet sound. Neiko chuckled a bit. Okay there was a living soul after all. Her black kitten named Shinji. Shinji purred and meowed. Neiko patted Shinji’s head and picked him up.
‘’Where is everybody, hmm ?’’ Neiko asked Shinji quietly as the cat meowed again and licked Neiko’s face. She patted Shinji’s little head and put him down. Then she walked over the fridge to see a note. Strange. ~If this is one of Sylverant’s pranks, I’ll kill her...~ Neiko thought and read the note.

‘’Dear Sylverant and Neiko.
We have gone on a little vacation for a week.
Money is on the counter.
Please, stay out of trouble. And that means you, Sylverant !
Be back soon !

Love,
Your parents.’’


‘’Okay ?’’ Neiko laughed a bit at the ’stay out of trouble’ comment. But there was some shock too. This had naver happened to her and Sylverant. Neiko stared at the note for a minute in thought. That was before she just put the note on the counter, next to the money. Then grabbed an apple from the fruits bowl and walked up stairs to her room. Shinji followed her, his bell around his tiny neck jingled a bit.
The fruit was delicious. So sweet. She trew her back-pack in the corner of her room and trowing away what was left of the fruit in her recycle bin. Neiko sat on the little chair that was in front of the mirror. She stared at her reflection. She took off her black eye-patch only to look at a hole.It didn’t bleed. Nothing was there. Only emptiness. A lone tear falled from her right eye. Her face was sad but it was only for a second. Her face became full of anger and rage. She kicked the mirror. It broke. She let out a laugh. ~Heh, looks like it’s getting over me...~ she thought. Neiko put back her eye-patch and smiled. Dark. Her smile darker than the darkness. Darker than her cat’s eyes. She then glanced at her back-pack. ‘’Well, I have more important buisiness than doing some stupid home works...’’ she walked over her bed, where the newest book of hers was. She picked it up and walked out of her room, Shinji following her. The attic. There waited her newest creation. All she needed to do was to do a ritual...
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