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PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 2:43 pm


Name: Kihei Sananmaro

Age:Appears to be 18

Rank:Lieutenant

Gender:Male

Race:Shinigami

Weapon:
Zanpakuto

Zanpakuto Name:
Kousenkiyo Release phrase " In purity, shine upon the heavens and earth, open your wings to those in need, and destroy those which cause harm. Kousenkiyo, Purge!"

Weapon/Abilities
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Shikai

Transforming into a glowing scythe of pure light Kousenkiyo can now manipulate light turning into complete energy, and blasting it at its opponent. The light can also be manipulated to block any kidou spells or melee attacks.

Kyokukou genkaku(Aurora Illusion) Entering a realm of pure light, Kihei and the user are removed from the time and place where they had just been and are forced to be in a 1v1 duel. This ability also allows Kihei to manipulate the light around the realm in any way he wishes, which includes. While in the realm Kiheis amount of reiatsu increases, allowing his kidou abilities to increase to captain level.



Abilities while in Bankai

Kousenkiyo retains its form but now, Kiheis body is surrounded by a aura of pure light and two wings come out of his body, allowing him to fly at incredible speeds. By covering himself in both wings Kihei can form himself into a glowing ball of pure energy launching himself at the enemy. The wings also preform as a form of blocking himself, which means that Kihei can fight up to 3 opponents at the same time.


Ranpu Chuuseki( Light Pillar): 4 pillars of pure light surround Kihei, protecting him until the 4 pillars have been completely destroyed, the amount of damage that can be taken by these pillars is still unknown, but what is known is that they can deflect multiple, kidou spells, or ceros at once.

A-Kutou(Arc Light): A blast of light emerges from Kiheis zanpakuto, the blast can either be charged or just sent towards the enemy at an incredible speed, causing a lot of damage to the opponent.

Personal Abilities:

Melee Skills: That of a lieutenant or captain

Light Phase: Kiheis shikai/bankai ability with his Zanpakuto includes an ability called Light Phase, very much like the Flash Step, though instead of of just dashing in an incredible burst of speed to certain areas where light exists. Light Phase manipulates the light around Kihei and allows him to dissapear in a glow of light and re appear without fear of his enemy sensing his presence after using this ability.
Hadou

1. Shō (衝, Thrust) Pushes the target away from the caster.[28]Incantation: unknown.

4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.[29]Incantation: unknown.

11. Tsuzuri Raiden (製本雷, Bound Lightning) Electric current flows
through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.[30]Incantation: unknown

31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire) Fires a ball of red energy at a target.[31]:Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!" ("君臨者よ!血雨の仮面·万象·羽ばたき·ヒトの名を冠す者よ!焦熱と争乱、海隔て逆巻き南へと歩を進めよ!")[31]

Bakudou

1. Sai (塞, Restrain) Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.[3]Incantation: unknown.

4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) An energy rope entangles the target's arms.[4]Incantation: unknown.

8. Seki (斥, Repulse) Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it.[5]Incantation: unknown.

9. Geki (撃, Strike) Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them. Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!" ("自壊せよロンダニーニの黒犬!! 一読し・焼き払い・自ら喉を掻き切るがいい!")

9. Hōrin (Disintegrating Circle) Causes an orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns to erupt from the users hand and attempt to trap a target. the end of it remains in the hands of the user allowing them to control the path of the tendril before and after capture. The Kidō is able to connect with another one of itself if both have captured a target and bind them together. Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!" ("自壊せよロンダニーニの黒犬!! 一読し・焼き払い・自ら喉を掻き切るがいい!")

21. Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape) Creates a blast upon activation and is used like a ninja's smoke bomb.[6]Incantation: unknown.


30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam) Forming a golden triangle with one's finger, it shoots three beams of light that pin the target to one place on a surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in a shape of a perfect triangle.[8][9]Incantation: unknown.

Character Bio:
Aeldevera was one of Kihei's friends, as both of them had been in the same squad for some time. Kihei looked up to Aeldevera, being that he was already 3rd seat. Aeldevera spent a long period of time helping Kihei train his kido, and even tried to inspire his shikai training.
Their connection together, would last for centuries beyond. Kihei learned greatly from Aelde and became knowledgeable in the art of Kido and excelled at his skills in melee combat. As the years went by Aelde became like a brother towards Kihei, after returning from a long and tiring mission Aelde was summoned to the Head Captains courters. After a week had passed Kihei had begun to worry, he quickly raced to the Head Captain causing and uproar wondering where his friend had gone. The Head Captain that Aelde had left the Court Guard Squads. Kihei stormed out of the Head Captains room and secluded himself to his own barracks. Kihei became secluded hiding himself from society fighting other shinigami for giving him looks. The Head Captain finally decided to banish Kihei to Maggots Nest where he could no longer harm himself, or the Soul Society. After being sent to Maggots Nest, Kihei saw Aelde, his old friend, flesh to flesh. Quickly the two friends recapped and exchanged stories. Kihei found out that Aelde had been sent here under false accusations that he had murdered 3 shinigami. Kihei became even more enraged with the Soul Society, knowing in his heart that Aelde could never do such a thing.

Appearance: 5'11, short white hair, bangs covering his eyes, athletic build.

Additional Information: Holds an inner rage towards the Soul Society for imprisoning his friend Aelde under false accusations. Loves to fight.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 4:09 pm


Hello, my name is Aaron.

Couple things, I'm not a mod, however I'll give you some info.

You can't create a spell over 99, and on top of that, there is no Hado 2. Also, any spells created, must be sent to Shido, the guild Captain for acceptance.

...No shikai or bankai details... just shooting light and gaining speed/power is not an explanation. You must be thorough.

Your bio could be expanded on a bit more, you need to specify what he was doing during the 14th Squad's Rebellion. We need to have an idea of how old this shinigami is. Also, what is his rank, what squad is he in?

You ought to really look at other profiles, and consider reconstructing your own. If you want, you can PM me for advice.

This criticism is for the greater good. I've dealt with the same deal mate, expect more from Shido, and Lucien, with possibly more mods/guild members. Thank you for reading this.

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Lucien the Inferno
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 4:20 pm


Yeah, actually, I kind of agree on all points. Go through the main forum, look through the info threads and try this again. PM one of the mods if you think you need help.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 6:52 pm


I edited it, hope that's better.

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Lucien the Inferno
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 7:48 pm


Better, but there is a bit of discrepency we need to hammer out.

Is Kihei a Maggot's Nest prisoner? You say a lot about him being a friend of Aeldevera, so I'll assume you've already talking this over with Def, but you never actually state that he was imprisoned in the Maggot's Nest. Even if he was, he wouldn't have been put there for dissention of Aeldevera's imprisonment since no one outside 1st Squad, 2nd Squad or Central 46 (which is currently empty) is supposed to even know about the Maggot's Nest. Whenever someone is put there, their record simply states that they resigned from the Gotei.

You could just have it that Kihei felt abandoned when Aeldevera left and started to become resentful and unwilling to get close to other Shinigami. This would cause those in power to see him as a potential threat and have him locked up in the Maggot's Nest, where he would find Aeldevera.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 7:54 pm


Hmm, thanks Lucien, i'll put that in there.

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Lu Feng Xiaan
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:45 pm


So he's a Lieutenant level Shinigami, but he has a Bankai? I realize that Renji has Bankai, and so does Ikkaku, but it's not extremely common for Lieutenant level shinigami to have Bankai, and since he isn't actually a Lieutenant having Bankai automatically makes him Captain class. So.... yeah. Either list him as Captain class, or take away his Bankai. Honestly, I feel like we already have enough Convicts that have their Bankai. Shidobu? Lucien? What do you two think about this?
PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:54 pm


Well, I know my say isn't as important as some others, since I just recently joined and am new to most in depth RP, but I believe that if the Convicts are going to have a standing chance of escaping imprisonment they have to be a force to be reckoned with, saying the least if the escape were to succeed, Captains would most likely be put on duty to subdue the threat, so wouldn't the escapees have to have the power to defend themselves against those Captains, which would include the ability of a Bankai. I may be wrong though..just a thought.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 9:04 pm


Wrong. Kihei, Private, whatever you want to be called. You failed to talk to me about making a convict and just did so on your own. This leads me to believe that you did not read the "What we need" sticky in the main forum. Please make sure you read everything in that forum (other than the OOC). I know it's a lot, but it will make things a lot easier on me and everyone else.

Now, with that out of the way, I want to say that the escapees from the Maggot's Nest are not going to run into any resistance along the way out. That will be made clear when the event actually takes place. There's a reason for it. So really everyone from the Nest can escape, Captain Class or otherwise. I wanted up to 4 Captain level shinigami, and realizing how totally badass the escapees actually are going to be I've changed that number to 3 considering that we will be having 4 Generals AND any lesser Marak'Hai they want to bring along, along with the 6 possible lieutenant level escapees. That said, your character cannot be Captain Class. This is for two reasons: first off you didn't ask me to be a convict, and second, we don't need any more. However, because of the fact that your character doesn't know a ton of Kidou, and isn't "a master of swordsmanship" and doesn't have "an insane amount of reiatsu" I will consider him to be Lieutenant Class even considering he has Bankai.

Congratulations. You're the equivalent of Renji only much much faster when your Bankai is released.
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