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 Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2012 4:13 am
Hi there. I've started writing a series, and I've finished the first "episode". I've posted it on deviantArt as well as here.
I don't need an in depth critique, as in, a sentence by sentence one. I've posted it and don't plan on editing it. But, if you guys could give tips as to my writing in general, I'd appreciate that. I think I take critiques well so don't be afraid. 3nodding
Thanks!
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:05 pm
Wow, that is a very interesting story. The viewpoint allows Jach to show his character/ uniqueness while still allowing the reader a chance to connect. And, overall it is pretty funny. At least to me.
I might look it over some more tomorrow, but those are my thoughts right now. Good job, and I can't wait to see what else you come up with.
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