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My world is dying! This world of mystical and magical creatures, the world I made with my own hands!
The Land is on fire, the water is gone, and so is the very sky that sustains us. It’s all gone. I am now all that’s left of this world. Please God Tell me who did this horrible thing to this planet! Your servant must know who has destroyed his land, his home, his very existence!
I hear foot steps behind me. Is this the one? I to the approaching figure and I can’t believe my eyes. It’s him, my lover! “Were you the one who did this?”
“Yes my love.” He says, his voice sounds dark. I’ve never heard this tone from him before.
“Why did you do this? This was our home!”
“Correction, this was your home, little Angel. I destroyed my home 50 years ago!” His voice sends shock wave through my soul. Was he the one who split Solaris into two? The world protected by the sacred dragons?
“You’re the one, aren’t you?”
“Yes, I had to rest here to gather my strength so I could destroy your planet, but something unexpected happened.”
“What?”
“Part of me actually fell in love with you” His voice became softer with those words. Almost as if….
“Who are you?” He walks over to me and caresses my face.
“I offer you a choice,” he says to me in a kind voice, “Either join me as an fallen angel or die here.” His eyes burn into me I fell the fire within his soul and yet it feels like something is amiss.
“Tell me, what will you do after you leave here?” I ask quietly. He takes a step away from me. I notice the fires on the land have finally reach my castle.
“I shall go to planet earth, I was going to skip that planet but you sent the beings of this world to that one and even though I still got a few I must kill them all per my master’s orders.” As he says this, the wings of a bat come out from his back and also appear on his head.
“Then I shall make sure that you die here!” My wings take me into the sky and I fly away. He follows me. The sky being gone gives rise to fearsome air currents due to the fire but they are nothing to me. I dive straight through a tornado of fire, but he still follows me. This is good for I have a plan.
I continue flying north trying to keep ahead of the winged demon. Suddenly the air in front of me is pulling me back. I look back to see that the demon is sucking in the air. I try to fly down towards the fire to break free from the current, but the air stops. I look back again to see the demon looking back at me with a sinister look in his eye. Almost the look of a dragon when he gazes at the one sent to defeat him. Then suddenly, His breath turns to fire before my very eyes. The fire comes quickly toward me. I let myself fall bit in the sky. And fly off again. I’m almost to that place; I can see it from here. It hasn’t been taken over by fire yet for some reason. I fly to this place. I’d figure I’d come to the sacred tree but I hadn’t. I had come to the last piece of land there was with a dead tree. But something was hanging from one of its branches. Before I could investigate I was stuck across the face. I fall to the ground. “My precious one, why do you run from me?”
I chuckle a little to myself, “I’m not to keen on being burnt to death.”
He laughs at that and replies; “well now you won’t be able to run away again!” he stomps on my wing and I cry out in pain.
“How could you do this to me? I loved you and I thought you loved me to!” I shout. I look up at him to see tears coming from his eyes.
“Me a demon, love you an angel? Your mistaken.” He stops for a minute like in a trance. His eyes wide open as if he was scared. He snaps back to life and smashes my other wing into the ground while almost chanting, “No one could love you, only we can love you!”
“Please Stop!” I cry at the top of my lungs, while I writhe in pain from my broken wings. He stops. He steps away from me. I look to him. He looks scared and shocked.
“Someone help me…” he says quietly. There’s a sudden green light, and green jewel floats between us. We both reach for it and…….